I wrote this when I was 12. Hope you like it. Tell me any errors you find in it and I will fix it. READ ALL OF STORY BEFORE ROLLING DOWN!!
The love, the entertainment… I loathe it.
At the same time… I love it.
Why do I love her? Why can’t I stop? It’s our anniversary. Ever since highschool we had looked out for each other, loved each other. But now? I feel like I shouldn’t rely on her anymore… I shouldn’t be with her… Or should I? Is there anything wrong with relying on somebody? No… this isn’t relying on somebody… This is obsessing with something…
“You look sad.” she said to me. “Can you remember what day it is today?” she asked. “Of course. Please… let me go outside. I need to think for a bit.” I said. “Oh? Getting a present for a certain somebody?” she said, with a matter-of-factly tone. “…-- Yeah. Just give me some time.” I replied. “It’s okay, I’ll allow it.” She said, on a closing note.
I went outside. I was walking through the bustling streets. Suddenly, the crowds got less dense. What am I doing? Why am I still with her? Why can’t I just say no to myself? I don’t know. There were no people around me anymore. I was lost. I didn’t recognise this street. I turned around to see two bright lights.
I woke up in a white room, with a lady dressed in white next to me. I could remember exactly what happened. I’m an idiot. Walking straight in front of that car. “Are you okay?” the nurse said. “Yeah… I’m just fine. How long have I been out?” I replied. “One hour. It’s a miracle you’re fine. You have no injuries at all, save for a nasty bruise on your left leg. The driver slowed down quite a bit before he hit you.” “Okay… Am I allowed to leave now?” “Yes, you’re clear to leave Mr.”
I walked out. I can’t believe it. Why didn’t they run anymore tests just to make sure? Wait, it’s my anniversary! I need to bolt! Wait… why? Does she need a present? Does she need to be with me? Why am I still with it? I need to leave her… I need to boot her out of my house…
I walked in the front door. I said “Honey… we need to talk.” She replied with “…That can’t be good…” After we sat down, I gripped her hand in mine and said to her “I don’t feel fine with you… I don’t feel okay staying with you….” She was set aback. She said “Heh. You can’t live without me. You love the thrill of staying with me.” I mustered up my strength and said to it “I may love it, but I need to go without it. I can’t live with you.”
“Do you really think you can live without me? Without me… You’re just an isolated piece of trash. Without me to make you unique, you will just fall into the same old pitfall every day. ‘What do I do with myself?’ When you found me, you found your answer.” She said. “Everything you say… is right. But… I can’t… I hate you! I can’t stand you! Get out of my life!” I screamed out. She simply disappeared.
The love, the entertainment… I loved it.
At the same time… I loved to get rid of it.
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